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Dedicated to Hatori and Kanna from Fruits Basket anime/manga ~


The eyes that filled with tears for love
The ruby lips that quivered
I hold in still the memories
The pain that look delivered
I couldn't say I needed you
I want to scream your name
I walked away in silent tears
Just clutching at my pain
I couldn't turn and hold you close
Your tears though fell inside me
If I did turn I'd lose my hold
And want you there beside me
I hear your cries in silent nights
When I am all alone
I cannot scream I cannot shout
I cannot cry or groan
When by your side the days flew by
And weeks rolled into months
Now I'm alone, each passing day
Gets heavier by tons
I miss your touch, your gentle ways
Your kindness filled my life
You broke the Ice, your kind sweet smile
Brought spring in my cold life
When I read the Fruits Basket manga two years ago the Hatori and Kana part made me cry like unconsiously and I realized my face was streaming with tears only after I got to the end of the chapter... even worse with the anime... I was totally sobbing...

this poem came out as a result...

a Tamahome no Miko original...
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SpacemoogleXD Featured By Owner May 4, 2009
aww, this is really beautiful!
And i totally think this really sums up Hatori and Kanna...
aww...it's so sad!! they deserved to be together! bah, that akito*grumble*

Yeah, I cried too! but I haven't seen the anime...yet! :D

anywho, this is a really nice piece of work! keep it up! :D
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
awwws Thank you ^-^ I'm really happy someone who knows it and understands the situation can read it and understand it ^^ you must watch the anime! they changed the ending parts (LAME END) but the story is pretty much the same, Hatori and Kanna episode was SAD! I was stunned at how perfect it was... if you watch it you'll love it even more ^^ ty for commenting it's really encouraging ^_^
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SpacemoogleXD Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
You're very welcome! :)
Yeah!I'm planning on watching it soon- I can't wait! :D Aw, a lame end sucks but I'm sure the rest will be brill! Aw, I'm sure the hatori/kanna episode will be really sad...Aw, I love furuba! *laughs*
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Malacup14 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
your poetry is awsome! i wish i could do poetry as good at that!
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
it's not all that good >.<;; but ty so much for liking ^^;
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Malacup14 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
well i still like it
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ty ^^ that's very kind and encouraging of you ^__^
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Malacup14 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
thanks! xp
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stardust-memoirs Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
I kind of enjoyed it, though it was a bit choppy ^^.
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol ty ^^;
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