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December 29th 2008 10:21 AM

Scream...
Cry...
Even if you yell
break the silence
That resides in my soul
Throw a stone
Touch it with your fingertips
Make a ripple in
The deep water silence
It's making my heart sink
Shovel it out
Melt it with love
Give a little warmth
Melt the frozen silene
that's making my breath stop
Talk to me..
Let me hear your thoughts
help me voice my words
Break the silence
That's breaking us apart...
When the silence grows and words are unsaid... it feels like inside something keeps screaming... and yet it's still so silent...

A Tamahome no Miko original
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Slaven-Harkin Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2009  Hobbyist
This makes me feel like someone was no longer talking to someone else... That it felt like they were the only two in the room, yet neither would speak. I've felt that lately so maybe that feeling is clouding the true meaning behind this, but thats what I feel when reading this.
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stardust-memoirs Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
aww poor silence :(
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol! you're making me look like some cruel killer lol
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stardust-memoirs Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
I'm far far worse. You might discover that when you read through the projects xD.
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
lol nah, anything heartfelt is to be appriciated ^^ writing shouldn't be compared, people put their feelings in when they write, no one can compare feelings right ^^
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stardust-memoirs Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
dunno. I question what is expressed out of something written while on an art block which feels like so much of my stuff is xD. haha. I really want to though get of that problem with not being able to feel the atmosphere of my writing, I can easily with others :(, so it bugs me, then again, I'm one who thinks that nothing is ever finished, so maybe that's why...oh well.
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I kinda understand what you mean, that's what makes a good poet though ^^ you're pretty down to earth for someone with your talents ^^
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stardust-memoirs Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
well, another problem that bugs me is that in my vocabulary D:. I don't like using fancy/smart words, but at the same time I feel annoyed by the words I seem to repeat. D::::
How many ways can you tell the same story over and over again!? ;_;
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o0Miaka0o Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG OMG OMG!!!! *HUGGLES* I KNOW RIGHT ! that's the EXACT same with me! wow I found a similar person <3
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